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RaistlinsLight23
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 Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 01:29:01
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Well, I think both of you have a talent for it based on what I've read on here with the threads. You guys seem to add a lot into your characters, things that I don't think about. They come through really strong and the styles are unique. Also, I like the word choice and way that things are described. I love reading detailed stuff...and I must say that your writing together in the "Murder" thread is very fun to read because of how the characters clash and interact. I hope you guys don't mind that I kinda follow along with it...lol.
"Raistlin!" It was Crysania's voice. Lifting his gaze, he saw her standing before him, holding his hands away from his face, her eyes wide and filled with concern.
"I'm all right", Raistlin said coldly. "Leave me alone!" But, even as he spoke, he sighed and lowered his head again, shuddering as the horror of the dream washed over him. Pulling a clean cloth from a pocket, he began to dab at the wounds on his face.
"No, you're not", Crysania murmured, taking the cloth from his shaking hands and gently touching the bleeding gouges. "Please, let me do this", she said, as he snarled something unintelligible. "I know you wont let me heal you, but there is a clear stream near. Come, drink some water, rest and let me wash these".
Sharp, bitter words were on Raistlin's lips. He raised a hand to thrust her away. But then he realized he didn't want her to leave. The darkness of the dream receded when she was with him. The touch of warm, human flesh was comforting after the cold fingers of death.
And so, he nodded with a weary sigh.
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NinjaMaster 42
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USA
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 01:41:44
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Would you like an autograph?  jk.
Armed? Armed with what? Hmm, lets see.. bad breath, colorful language, feather duster... WHAT DO YOU THINK THEY'RE ARMED WITH!!! GUNS, YOU TIT, GUNS!!!
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RaistlinsLight23
Advanced Member
USA
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 01:44:30
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Haha. Maybe someday... I just thought that I should mention that I liked it
"Raistlin!" It was Crysania's voice. Lifting his gaze, he saw her standing before him, holding his hands away from his face, her eyes wide and filled with concern.
"I'm all right", Raistlin said coldly. "Leave me alone!" But, even as he spoke, he sighed and lowered his head again, shuddering as the horror of the dream washed over him. Pulling a clean cloth from a pocket, he began to dab at the wounds on his face.
"No, you're not", Crysania murmured, taking the cloth from his shaking hands and gently touching the bleeding gouges. "Please, let me do this", she said, as he snarled something unintelligible. "I know you wont let me heal you, but there is a clear stream near. Come, drink some water, rest and let me wash these".
Sharp, bitter words were on Raistlin's lips. He raised a hand to thrust her away. But then he realized he didn't want her to leave. The darkness of the dream receded when she was with him. The touch of warm, human flesh was comforting after the cold fingers of death.
And so, he nodded with a weary sigh.
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Fizban Who
Moderator
USA
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 05:24:13
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Yes NM, you do have an act for creating some great villains..... 
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
-Edmund Burke-
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dark mage
Moderator
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 05:26:08
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No worries Raist, I dont know about NM but I am flattered.
"Ladies and Gentilman welcome to my life again" Sonata Artica |
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NinjaMaster 42
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 05:30:17
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I am. I just thought it was a good time for a joke.
Armed? Armed with what? Hmm, lets see.. bad breath, colorful language, feather duster... WHAT DO YOU THINK THEY'RE ARMED WITH!!! GUNS, YOU TIT, GUNS!!!
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RaistlinsLight23
Advanced Member
USA
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 05:40:20
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Haha. Well, you're welcome guys
"Raistlin!" It was Crysania's voice. Lifting his gaze, he saw her standing before him, holding his hands away from his face, her eyes wide and filled with concern.
"I'm all right", Raistlin said coldly. "Leave me alone!" But, even as he spoke, he sighed and lowered his head again, shuddering as the horror of the dream washed over him. Pulling a clean cloth from a pocket, he began to dab at the wounds on his face.
"No, you're not", Crysania murmured, taking the cloth from his shaking hands and gently touching the bleeding gouges. "Please, let me do this", she said, as he snarled something unintelligible. "I know you wont let me heal you, but there is a clear stream near. Come, drink some water, rest and let me wash these".
Sharp, bitter words were on Raistlin's lips. He raised a hand to thrust her away. But then he realized he didn't want her to leave. The darkness of the dream receded when she was with him. The touch of warm, human flesh was comforting after the cold fingers of death.
And so, he nodded with a weary sigh.
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Fizban Who
Moderator
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 06:03:02
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BLUSH, BLUSH.... BLUSH......
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
-Edmund Burke-
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RaistlinsLight23
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USA
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 06:08:48
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Hahahaha!!! |
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HammerFall
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Posted - 14 Aug 2012 : 14:42:21
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we are all good at role playing in our on way. |
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Fizban Who
Moderator
USA
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Posted - 15 Aug 2012 : 01:25:32
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FYI 2 U My Friends, I'm a closer tonight at the store. So I will be somewhat late, but then I'm an opener tomorrow also ...... 
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
-Edmund Burke-
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HammerFall
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Posted - 15 Aug 2012 : 01:32:09
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| WTF BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM |
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dark mage
Moderator
Canada
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Posted - 15 Aug 2012 : 06:53:50
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I have a very long stressful and stupid day comeing up tomorrow and it will be starting ridiculously early so I dont have time to do any more posting tonight. I will also be heading over to hang out at Billys place so it is likely that I will not be on tomorrow night. I am extreamly sorry and I shall catch up when I get home Thursday morning or maybe if I have time tomorrow I will be on in the afternoon.
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Fizban Who
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Posted - 16 Aug 2012 : 05:17:15
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NP DM, we all have had days like that also....
"The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing"
-Edmund Burke-
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HammerFall
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Posted - 17 Aug 2012 : 03:16:07
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| its alright cuz. Just be safe no matter what. |
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Randomness!
